Showing off the art!

Kim Reed, by Adelaide Halsey (Because we have established that MR Graham can't draw)

Kim Reed, by Adelaide Halsey (Because we have established that MR Graham can’t draw)

I’ve been collecting snazzy character art via DeviantART, where I hang out as QuiEstInLiteris. It’s amazing how many wonderfully talented people there are over there.

This is Kim Reed, one of the supporting characters of The MediumAt least, she started off as a supporting character, but at this point, I’d call her a co-protagonist. (There will be a page up for her soon, under the Dramatis Personae  tab.) I’ve mentioned her before on The Other Blog, but I wasn’t very specific. Kim is a Texan, native San Antonian, and a wizardlet. I want her to be a strong female character, but I know by now that the audience has a lot more to say about that than the author can, so all I can do is hope I pull it off.

Here’s her introduction:

Kim didn’t mind bodies as much as some people might. That cellar was horrible, and it stank, and it vibed her freaky in all the wrong ways, but it wasn’t horrible because there were dead people in it. It was horrible because something horrible had happened there, and it had stained the place in ways that bleach couldn’t fix. Fire would clean it out better than anything else.
She slid her improvised telephone back into her pocket and zipped a flame out of her little plastic lighter. Bones wouldn’t catch, and cement wouldn’t catch, but she could give the flame a little boost, and the whole place would go up like her family’s last Thanksgiving. It was only a shame Sebastian Duran wouldn’t have the front-row seat he deserved. But if he had been anywhere nearby, this wouldn’t have gone nearly as smoothly.
She blew carefully onto the flame, coaxing it brighter with a trickle of magic. Once the basement was going, she could go back up and light the building. All the buildings, just in case. She estimated ten minutes before the nearest fire station could get word, and another five for them to get there. Fifteen minutes would be more than enough time to destroy the structure of the place, maybe wipe the walls clean of some of the bad juju they had collected. There had to be ghosts in a place like that.
She blew on the flame again, and it fanned out yellow onto the heap of corpses. There wouldn’t be enough left to match dental records, but everyone down there looked like they had been gone long enough to have been pronounced dead, anyway. It twinged her conscience to take that closure from those families, but it was more important to keep that pile from getting any bigger. The flame caught, dancing along a broken femur with a cheerful crackle as it slowly grew brighter than her flashlight.
And something hit her from behind, knocking her knees out from under her. She stumbled and hit her hip on the stairs. She could feel spindly, brittle fingers close on the fabric of her blue jeans, and she brought her flashlight down hard on them. They crunched like corn chips and pulled away with a papery hiss, and Kim scrambled up to try to get a look at her attacker.
She had taken it for the freshest of the corpses, halfway to mummification, but now that she looked closer, there was a weird suppleness to the withered flesh. It wasn’t rotting, either, just drying up like a raisin. Pruny, wrinkled skin clung close to its bones and stretched tight over a highly visible skull. Its eyes were dull and stained dark red from pupil to lid, and its lips were drawn back from white, slightly crooked teeth. The canines, top and bottom, were long and sharp.
The jaws parted as Kim watched, and the body tightened as though to lunge, but it toppled forward instead and lay still for a moment before gathering the strength to drag itself cross the remaining distance. It was fascinating to watch, and painful at the same time. Kim stepped back, up the steps and out of reach. The thing pulled itself to the foot of the stairs, put out its broken hand, and then stiffened. Its eyes rolled back, and it fell to its side with a scratchy exhalation.
Not taking her eyes off of the thing, Kim took her compact back out and shoved a spark of power into the glass.
“Hey,” she said. “It’s me again.”
“Kim?” said the voice from the other end. “Whatchoo got?”
“I found something. I think it might be a vampire. Been down here a long time. Should I try to get it out of here or just let it burn?”
“How bad is it?”
“Looks like a mummy. Can’t tell the sex. Tried to get me, but can’t seem to move real well. My guess is Duran was keeping it for a pet or something, then forgot it was down here.”
There was a moment of silence on the other end. Then, “Let it burn. Put it out of its misery. Just knock it out first, or something. Be the kind thing to do.”
“’Kay. I’ll see you in a few.”
She hefted her flashlight and stepped down to the lowest stair.
One flat, red eye rolled up to look at her. There was no intelligence there, but it took in her stance, and there was a flash of recognition, the same way a beaten dog recognizes a broom. The eye shut so it couldn’t see the blow coming, and the crispy face turned down, pressing into the grimy floor.
“Oh, honey,” Kim whispered.
The fire flickered along an empty rib cage and leaped to the mummy’s tattered khakis. It whimpered.
“Oh, honey,” she said again. She cinched up her necklace, bringing the little cluster of religious medals up closer to her throat, shoved her flashlight into the waistband of her pants, and shook out her milagro bracelets. Then she slapped out the fire that was creeping up the mummy’s leg, threw its arm over her shoulders, and dragged it up the stairs.

5 thoughts on “Showing off the art!

  1. KIM oh my beautimous wizardlet favorite character 😀

    This Audience Member Who Loves Strong Ladies approves of Kim. 😛 ‘Course, I’m much more interested in a strong STORYLINE for a female character than the character herself. I like the Tough Girl because I like tough characters in general, but I have no problem with a weaker lady (easily frightened, not self-confident, etc. etc.) as long as it doesn’t become an excuse for a manly man to SAVE HER from her own development. (Reasons I love Rowan: she spends as much time rescuing Daniel as vice versa. Although she’s another Tough Lady.)

    I had a workshop class where — EVERY time I asked about characterization for one of my ladies — said, “Wow, they’re all really strong women!” and had little else to comment. And when I pointed out that one of his two female protagonists had Passive Character Syndrome, he said, “But if I make her strong like [other character], won’t they be just alike?” /sigh

    THIS WAS TOTALLY NOT MEANT TO BE A RANT OR CRITICISM I JUST HAVE THOUGHTS. and your post kinda sorta almost half-invited comments on female characters. and KIM I LOVE KIM

    • Oh, no worries! Female characters are one of my serious bugaboos. Especially when I’m really proud of one, and then I go back over the plot and realize that every time she had an impact on the plot, it was only by inspiring someone else to action. xP
      And yes, it’s really irritating when someone confuses “Strong Female” – a character TYPE – with a character TRAIT. You know, well WHY DO YOU SAY SHE’S STRONG? What specific characteristics make a character fall into that type?
      But yes, I am pleased that you think she’s not passive, because you always seem to know what you’re talking about. ❤

      • Urgh that’s a problem I’ve had. I was SO UTTERLY DELIGHTED by my female protagonist, and then looked over the plot and realized…she spent most of the time sitting sighing about how she was homesick. And wasn’t actually working toward anything. No idea how that happened blargh.

        Haha I’m pleased you think I know what I’m talking about. You just haven’t caught me in any off-the-wall random foolishness yet.

      • Guess it just goes to show how deeply this stuff is ingrained; it creeps in, even if you’re fully aware and deliberately working to avoid it.
        And we all have moments of slobbering crazy. If we didn’t, what would we laugh at? ;D

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